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    What do you think?

    I was bored...
    It's pretty simple, but nice...




    Please give me advice.

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    Once there was someone who asked me to design a Alliance page for a game, But in the end They did not need it ...



    What do you think?

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    The HxH one is too simple, and the text doesn't really fit... Also why is it so dark? Like you brushed a low opacity black brush over the whole thing :O

    The alliance page is pretty good, again, text needs some work, and that curly thing next to Luffy's feet doesn't fit at all...

    You should watch some tutorials, I'm sure with practice you'll be much better :O

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    Quote Originally Posted by FireclawX View Post
    The HxH one is too simple, and the text doesn't really fit... Also why is it so dark? Like you brushed a low opacity black brush over the whole thing :O

    The alliance page is pretty good, again, text needs some work, and that curly thing next to Luffy's feet doesn't fit at all...

    You should watch some tutorials, I'm sure with practice you'll be much better :O
    Thank you very much for the criticism, that what i was looking for...

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    I think the swirls are cute, it adds some nice symmetry.

    You weren't kidding when you said simple about the first one lol.

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    Hmm, I think the first one, while it is nice, needs more light to it.
    Also, the text.. it fits the character, sorta, but not the pic that much.
    Perhaps if Killua was holding a weapon or standing next to a lying figure it would add more ground to the text.

    As for the OP pic, I think the only problem I had with it was the curly lines.
    It looks sorta like waves/water to me, but in that position, it seems out of place.
    It might've looked better if it had been positioned in the lower parts of the image.
    Otherwise, nice job.
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